Hi everybody I’m Gabriel Cano my friends call me Gabo. Well I don’t really know much about this name, but I know that it’s Hebrew and means "that strong and brave man of God" and other meanings say "the one that brings light, the one who brings peace and love the announcer ". Well I don’t know why my parents chose Gabriel, but I’m sure that they had a reason. I live in Barranquilla and I have two brothers. My sister lives in USA and my brother lives here. I live with my parents. I have a lot of friends they are nice. Umm, my sister lives in United States, she is very nice with me, I love her and I miss her a lot.
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Hi Gabriel!!
ResponderEliminarGood composition but i found some mistakes,for example:
my parents choose:my parents chose
my brother live:my brother lives
I hope that my corrections are of great use to you
hi gabriel
ResponderEliminari will like more investigate about the origin of your name you do not the wonders that can find and you are some sintax mistake when you use the quotes you must close it because we need know where the idea begins and ends.
good luck
gabriela navarro reyes
hey i don`t know how to fix it
ResponderEliminaryou know how?
Hi!I think that you have to write more about the origin of your name.
ResponderEliminarVERY GOOD YOUR MEMBERSHIP , I AGREE WHIT THE OTHER , FIND OUT EVEN MORE ABOUT THE ORIGIN OF YOUR NAME ,
ResponderEliminarYOU HAVE ONE MISTAKE ,YOU CAN´READ THAT THEY HAVE A REASON , IS "THAT THEY HAD A REASON "
:O this is very very .... Deep hahahaha XD
ResponderEliminari think like our classmates, you have to investigate more about your composition ;)
God BlessYou :D
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ResponderEliminarHi Gabriel.
ResponderEliminarIt is a nice composition and i found one mistake you said that you have 2 brother and then you said something about your sister therefor is siblings.